hiya, i can see you have a lot to offer. your concepts are strong, but you have not explored typography enough this semester. would have liked to see you flesh out the bucket list. as is, not an overwhelming show of great typography. next semester better, pls? xox. g
should mention that calm down and your edit spread are quite good and almost finished. i think we discussed you tweaking the calm down piece a bit? good work on those two. bring everything up to that level. g
hiya, i can see you have a lot to offer. your concepts are strong, but you have not explored typography enough this semester. would have liked to see you flesh out the bucket list. as is, not an overwhelming show of great typography. next semester better, pls? xox. g
ReplyDeleteshould mention that calm down and your edit spread are quite good and almost finished. i think we discussed you tweaking the calm down piece a bit? good work on those two. bring everything up to that level. g
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